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    Newbie seeking some constructive criticism

    Hey all. I don't have a lot of experience with art and have been looking for some feedback with a concept I had for cloud-like hair for a faerie character.

    I also notice the quality look a lot lower when I uploaded it? There's some distortion and the lines aren't as clear. Is that because it's a .jpg? Or should I change the resolution?
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    Hummmm... to start off I would suggest doing some anatomy and facial structure study.

    As it stands her head is two wide and all of her features are skewed to the right. If you run a straight line from the center top of the head to the center point in the chin you can see what I mean. Also, the total length of her head from crown to chin is quite a bit short, making it look like she is missing the crown of her skull.

    Try checking out some of Proko videos on youtube, they are super helpful and have a lot of great information for beginners! I would also suggest that you start doing some life drawing and general observation studies.

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    shift nose and mouth in the middle like this and always save as png, way better qaulity
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