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    Old House

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    I tried to play with perspective here, but I feel like it didnt quite work out.
    What I also worrry about are the values


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    Looks interesting, though I think that center piece of the structure needed to come out more else it looks like a flat, straight, line from left to right.


    The values look ok.


    You may want to decide on what gets shingles and what doesn't. The top left smooth overhang look it should.. same with the one below it..


    The half curved trim piece on the bottom left definitely could be smaller seeing as it is relative to a door or window.
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    thank you so much ! it really helps me a lot, im sorry for the late answer

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