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    Arik's Sketchbook

    Hi, I'm a storyboard and concept artist. I want to push my work further as I have trouble with that final 'polish' - so please critique away!

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    There's more development on my artstation: https://www.artstation.com/arikb for some reason some of the images don't want to upload here.
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    I have a long way to go when it comes to environments so any critique would be hugely appreciated

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    Summoned Fire Hound creature concept for a story I've been working on.
    More bits here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/za1g2
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    I'm trying to improve my illustrative concept art - so doing stuff that isn't 100% model/turnaround sheets.

    I feel there's a lot to improve, but I learnt a lot with this piece and am looking forward to applying what I've learnt on the next one.

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    Please critique away!

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    Arik's Sketchbook

    My interpretation of elves - inspired by the Hulder in Scandinavian folklore.
    Process video on my ArtStation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/LLV3K

    As always - critique away

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    Your creatures and object designs have a great sense of "body" to them, a well-defined presence on the page. I like the color schemes you use, and would like to see slightly more bright colors. You seem to enjoy using an earthy color palette which works! Really like the environment you did -- a lost village disconnected from its bridge
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