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    I'm new and looking for criticism

    Hey, I'm totally new on this forum and I'm really looking for criticism here... My goals with my art involve doing a comic book that involve a super hero that happens to ride a bicycle. A huge obstacle that I found in my "art journey" was drawing said character riding said bicycle since I find so much trouble drawing people riding bikes, for some reason. I also want the art to look cartoony and dynamic. And I haven't found anyone who could really give me some concrete advice on my art up until now.

    Also, most of my art is done with a mouse.

    So... Anyone up to destroy my stuff?
    there ya go:

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    Also, Here's my deviant art page:

    https://www.deviantart.com/davethesodaguy/gallery/

    Thanks a lot.


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    I would think working on some fundamentals would help. Say making the bike tires actually round.


    Are you using any references?


    The bulk of your characters look to be leaning forward past the center of gravity.. what's up with that?
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    Quote Originally Posted by modi123 View Post
    Are you using any references?
    Yes, every time the character is riding his bike it's drawn with real life reference (pics I find online). Thanks for the tips.

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    Here's him getting attacked by a villain.... tried doing round tires and a more centered bulk, lol.

    I know his right foot looks kinda broken and stuff... and the other guy kinda looks like he's grabbing his junk.... maybe composition isn't right....


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    I think the colours and shapes of the first guy match the bike a bit too much. They both sort of bleed into one another and I thought he was some kind of bike transformer robot.

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    Try to clean up a little bit. There's some color bleeding out of the lines and lots of little dots of areas that forgot to be shaded or colored.

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