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    Lightbulb Need feedback on W.I.P.

    Hello!
    Iím working on this piece for someone and I just wanted to get feedback on the general composition/values/ and other artistic choices. I just want to make sure anything that sticks out is solved before I finish painting and rendering.
    Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
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    Background has too much noise, study proko's anatomy. For example you are missing trapezius and some others, deltoid is too massive and arm is too long
    Where is light coming from??? https://youtu.be/V3WmrWUEIJo https://youtu.be/-dqGkHWC5IU still lives are really good way to study it when you use one light source (dont use photo)
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    I'd push the perspective some more. A little more like this would give greater depth. Right now you've got everything in side view except that we see under her chin. That's very strange to look at. Also double check your center-line. The top of her rib cage is collapsed in toward her spine.
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    I mean, would it be so bad if all anyone remembers about me is that I was a lover of art, of women, and wine? Perhaps I reach too far.

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