Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: Need some help

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Feb 2014
    Location
    Odesa, Ukraine
    Posts
    26
    Thanks
    6
    Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts

    Need some help

    Hello.
    I'm not sure about the anatomy. Also, I want to show some action in this scene, but don't really know how to do it right. So any help would be great.
    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Last edited by Nataliya Pryk; July 23rd, 2018 at 09:24 AM. Reason: Tryint to change image size


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    Toronto, Ontario
    Posts
    3,403
    Thanks
    306
    Thanked 1,282 Times in 1,018 Posts
    It is not bad, anatomy wise, looks like her left foot is too wide.
    What is the action you want to show? She looks frightened? Of what? Of me? Why? You may want to think about storytelling...
    Grinnikend door het leven...

    Sketchbook Blog

  4. The Following User Says Thank You to eezacque For This Useful Post:


  5. #3
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    United States, TX
    Posts
    729
    Thanks
    66
    Thanked 375 Times in 285 Posts
    If I might suggest a simple way to add some "action" to the scene. Also, I'd add some color. This gray thing you've got going on is rather drab.
    Name:  moth-to-flame.jpg
Views: 555
Size:  165.7 KB
    Sketchbook

    The best way to hunt in a mushroom forest is to climb on the back of a butterfly.

  6. The Following 2 Users Say Thank You to David_a_ray For This Useful Post:


  7. #4
    Join Date
    Feb 2014
    Location
    Odesa, Ukraine
    Posts
    26
    Thanks
    6
    Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts
    Quote Originally Posted by eezacque View Post
    It is not bad, anatomy wise, looks like her left foot is too wide.
    What is the action you want to show? She looks frightened? Of what? Of me? Why? You may want to think about storytelling...
    Quote Originally Posted by David_a_ray View Post
    If I might suggest a simple way to add some "action" to the scene. Also, I'd add some color. This gray thing you've got going on is rather drab.
    Thank you for your thoughts.
    Maybe I wasn't clear. Sorry for that. By 'action' I meant that I am trying to draw a moment when she just-just finished movement or even continue movement. I didn't meant the idea of picture. This was training to draw figure in dynamics.

  8. #5
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Posts
    143
    Thanks
    59
    Thanked 42 Times in 31 Posts
    Hey, here's some ideas that may add dynamism to the overall image. I hope it helps you out!
    Name:  flying_character.jpg
Views: 467
Size:  412.9 KB

  9. The Following 2 Users Say Thank You to paulboutros For This Useful Post:


  10. #6
    Join Date
    Feb 2014
    Location
    Odesa, Ukraine
    Posts
    26
    Thanks
    6
    Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts
    Quote Originally Posted by paulboutros View Post
    Hey, here's some ideas that may add dynamism to the overall image. I hope it helps you out!
    Wow, that's interesting ideas! I know I'm not very good on making a dramatic light. You made me think of it. Though, maybe I'll leave her frightened. Thanks!

  11. #7
    Join Date
    Feb 2014
    Location
    Odesa, Ukraine
    Posts
    26
    Thanks
    6
    Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts

    Updated version

    I think I leave it like this. This seems to be my limit at the moment.

    Click image for larger version. 

Name:	469_Moth_NPrykhodchenko.jpg 
Views:	380 
Size:	458.2 KB 
ID:	2295994

Members who have read this thread: 35

Tags for this Thread

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Designed by The Coldest Water, we build the coldest best water bottles, ice packs and best pillows.