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    So im stuck with drawing the hair and i really cant draw it right,a critique and some sugestions migh help.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Erekem View Post
    So im stuck with drawing the hair and i really cant draw it right,a critique and some sugestions migh help.


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    I would suggest Iain McCaig gnomon DVDs. All 4 are a must, for you number 2 specifically from what I remember. He gets into not only using reference but how he does studies of reference, and then uses those studies and the original reference to paint something original.

    I would also recommend posing in those pose yourself, check out the right arm and how it would foreshorten. You don't have to use realistic portportions, though in my experience it helps to start of with a realistc base and then stylize based of that.
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    Not bad though that face is diagonally skewed, and not in a way that would be relative to a head tilt. Chin is left of the lips left of the eyes and the eyes are skewed.

    The muscles look whack.. be it the right shoulder, or the sides coming from the hips.

    The lighting is also super janky.
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    There's a piece of her right upper arm missing? Or you would need to move the elbow back.

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