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    Looking for a critique or any feedback that you think can help me Improve. Please let me know if the file is too large to view I am uploading from my iPad
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    Image size is fine. Same problem as earlier no real sense of light and shadow and no planar indication

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    I went back and tried to adjust based on the reference picture. In my minds eye the light is coming from his front right. Perhaps I am not using dark enough values for the shadows.

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    The blur is throwing me off, and making things look weird.. like the ears, and that brown chunk of hair on the right.. the heavy blur would indicate both are not part of the head, but substantially far alway.

    Same with the neck.

    The mouth is crooked or pulled weirdly to the right.

    If the light was from the right wouldn't you think there would be a bit mroe shadow on the left?

    They eye sockets don't match up.

    Amusing thing to try. Take this image and dump it in some program like Paint.net.
    Do your best to cut the image down the middle.
    Copy one half.
    Paste it in a new layer and flip it horizontally.. basically mirror one half and look at how things are. Then hide that layer and do the same for the other half.
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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