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    A promising start, but it needs a lot more effort in order to look interesting.
    Grinnikend door het leven...

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    I would try few things:

    Make the ground no so flat especially at the edge of the cliff where the grass has no thickness.
    Since the wall the dragon is coming from is broken/damaged, you could have big chunk/debris of the wall on the ground, in the shadow area, and also use the debris to hide and interrupt the uninteresting straight line of the wall base.
    The dragon with the mouth open will be more alive and threatening.

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