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    opinion about this one

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    Ok.. kinda boring and the... bones? Rocks? need to be sharpened and smoothed.

    The character.. hmm.. I am not sure what I am looking at.
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    My biggest gripe is that there are two focal points. These being the creature's head and the sun. You can have several focal points in an image, but each successive focal point must be subordinate to the previous one. Otherwise you have chaos. Right now you have your brightest bright against a medium light and your darkest dark against a medium light. That creates confusion about where to look though the light will always have a slightly stronger pull than the dark.

    For example, if you have your brightest color next to your darkest color, that'll be your primary focal point. If you place your second darkest dark and second lightest light next to each other they will be subordinate to the highestst contrast focal point, but still draw the eye to that area. You can continue this process until you reach your mid-tone if you wish.
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    I mean, would it be so bad if all anyone remembers about me is that I was a lover of art, of women, and wine? Perhaps I reach too far.

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