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    I need critique in my work.

    I need critique in my work. I want to add it to my portfolio in ArtStation.

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    It looks ok. The base looks weirdly 2d compared to the 3dish cork and top. Don't you think it would bow out a bit as well?
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    I think you should get one light and do study still life on class filled with liquid, wine in class would be great for this, basically any red liquid would do trick, as it needs more value contrast and look reflections and where color of liquid reflects, but agree with modi bottom seems bit flat and still life would help it as long as you think through form (ellipses in this case) then apply it on this potion vial.

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