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    Pls critique my portrait

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Size:  173.0 KB and weaknesses. I'm looking to improve my portrait skills. No formal art education so your feedback will help.


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    The facial proportions are off. The eyes are too small and tilted oddly as well as some of the dimensions from the cheeks and chin.

    You may want to do something easy like start off with a grid over the face so you get an idea where things lay out.

    Presumably some folk will come by and link drop books and what not for ya.
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by modi123 View Post
    Presumably some folk will come by and link drop books and what not for ya.
    Your are right

    You need to think form not shape, http://drawabox.com/ is good for thinking process, For heads check out Loomis Heads and Hand book, Proko have in he's youtube channel structure of face, skulls and azaro heads (planes of face) are good for heads as well

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    First I've heard of asaro head but I can see the benefits. Thank you

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