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    Any suggestion are welcome!

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    I'd brighten the two limbs so they don't draw as much attention. Additionally, I'd brighten the bush around the girl's head to draw more attention. I do like how you've placed cooler greens in the background and warmer greens closer to the foreground. Though, I might experiment with a more blue palette instead. I think that would boost the mood you're trying to evoke. I prefer my colors to be more romantically correct than realistically correct. Lastly...is that a word? Lastly, I would extend the bottom of the canvas slightly or just brush in some grass above the base of her tree. It's causing the image to be unnecessarily flat, because she appears to be farther forward. You could lower the swing instead, but that's a less elegant approach in my opinion.
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