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    Concept art critic

    Hi guys,
    Im trying to improve my concept art, but I would need some feedback so i could get better, so please write down your suggestions and critism :-) (mainly about composition )

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    I can't understand what I'm looking at. I mean obviously it's some kind of mage, but it's unclear what is going on and where I am supposed to look. For the latter part, I would point at the value arrangement as being the problem. Also, why are his legs so short?
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