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    Cave Painting

    Hi I'm new to the web-sight trying to start maintaining my art output. Anyone have a critique for this cave painting? I'm trying to improve my landscape art. (Be blunt if needed).
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    I dig the rock shapes, but yeah yo ucould work on detail in the green as well as the odd see-through-gray area. Over all it's not an interesting piece, but I think details and getting a purpose, per say, would help.
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    How much do you use references on this and you shoul do thumbnail sketches for this so you can plan out more interesting composition

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    Get a sketch pad and go outside. Cheap advice, but it's still good. You cannot begin to successfully draw something you've never properly observed. At least, not at the beginning.

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