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    Redraw Critique Wanted

    I did a redraw of a painting I did a year ago. Someone pointed out that the nipple was too much towards the side, shoulders were too small, and the hands were too small. I think the person is right, since I don't know too much about body anatomy yet.

    Thanks in advance :>

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    Try to study from life, self portrait is good for this I think as well Loomis head and hands book, Proko youtube, skulls. (structure) and azaro head for planes of face. You need to push values more for more contrast also you could hatch and not smudge as its easily turn mud.
    some examples, take a look contrast and use of unmolested tone of paper, try to get rid of timidness, dont be afraid to mess it up its part of process
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    Thanks stonec, I'll try to do everything you said when I have the time to do and get it.

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