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    Sci fi chick concept

    Hello guys, this is my first time posting here.
    Here is a personal piece im currently working on to practice. I'm kinda struggling with the light at the moment.
    Any commetnt, critque or tip on how to make it better would be much appriciated

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    David


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    she has hella small arms and hands. her feet are pigeon-toed making her stance awkward. Her torso is a little wonky. probably could increase the contrast between lights and darks.

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    So are we endorsing the similarities to some kind of alien space-suit erotica? Because if we are, then why not spice things up a bit? Name:  Sthpiaahthay.jpg
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    Um. If not. I'd consider rethinking the outfit and the whip, and probably don't add me as a friend.
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    The best way to hunt in a mushroom forest is to climb on the back of a butterfly.

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    Yeah, now that you mentioned the hands, I see it
    I'll find different solution for the feet and see what can be done with the torso.

    Thank you!

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    Hey thanks for the paint over. It should be a regular, non erotic, alien space suit
    And the whip would be kinda alien nagaika.

    Thank you very much

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    Quote Originally Posted by DStefanovic View Post
    It should be a regular, non erotic, alien space suit
    Dang. Oh, well.

    Being serious for a moment though, she reminds me of a beetle. The whip also looks like some kind of beetle antenna. Anatomical issues aside, I think the suit itself is pretty cool.
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    The best way to hunt in a mushroom forest is to climb on the back of a butterfly.

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    Hello guys,
    Thanks for the feedback. Here is the updated version.
    I wouldn't call it finished but it certanly looks better than before.

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