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    critique please RoKath

    I've redrawn this picture, worked on the shading a bit. Still looking for ways to improve on this picture.

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    Looks very faint. You should up your shading game.
    The eyes appear to be off a bit.
    You did well on the mouths.
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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