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    Hi!

    I'm working on this piece, and I'd love to have some of you weigh in while I can still fix things. What are the main issues? Thanks!
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    i really like the one on the right, the others have pretty wonky proportions though. how you did the legs on the right girl made me remember niklas jansson http://androidarts.com/ who used to post here back in the days ^^.

    his site seriously is a goldmine... dig deep .
    "Have only 4 values, but all the edges you want."
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    "To any man who has slaved to acquire skill in his art, it is most irritating to have his ability referred to as a 'gift.'"
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    Thanks! I measured the left and center characters and found several things to fix: the one on the left has a too-long torso and too-small, mismatched legs. Center character also has mismatched legs and an issue with her forearm. Sometimes I let things just grow and shrink as I color and don't notice... trying to get better about that. I'll work on fixing these and post a new version in a few days.

    And thank you for linking that amazing resource, from the spaghetti monster artist no less haha. I'm loving the Pokemon characters and just started reading the tutorial (which has some tips about looking at your work through a mirror to spot form errors. So helpful.). Thanks so much.
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    Fixed the proportions (to the best of my current ability), started details and blocked out the background

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    Finished version! still accepting critiques LOL

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