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    Looking for critique

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    It looks nice.. Well done on the hair brushing!


    Two things that do stand out is the eye could be looking forward more along the point of the nose, and the hair almost looks too fluffy.. like the fox just got out of the salon and had it all blown out.
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    Too much time brushing in hair and not enough time building the forms. Learn to draw simple shapes in perspective then build your foxes of boxes.
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    The best way to hunt in a mushroom forest is to climb on the back of a butterfly.

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