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    Storytime illustration

    Trying to figure out all the composition/proportion/design stuff before I go into color. Any crits before I move forwards?
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    Here's another update. Laying in some abstract colorName:  reading9.jpg
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    I dig it.. though that chair could be more than just the ink outline. Maybe chuck a little depth and color since it is right there.

    I like the subtle 'multiple hands' bit.. though the middle right one looks backwards?
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    Might I suggest an alternate color/value layout?
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