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    Smile Something fishy.

    It's been a while since I've posted, and lately I've been doing some work with ballpoint pen.
    These are all pretty much finished.

    They're all done with the same medium and on the same size paper, so I figured I would tie all 3 to this post.


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    And the last one, I was going for a bit more of a characterized face, by hinting at him having a mustache and such.

    Interested in hearing your thoughts.


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    They look nice. All three seem to lack gills.

    The top one has a weird issue where I can't judge the fishy's body.. specifically the back half - post the fins. Also the top spins could do with being a part of the fish and not cribbed by having them jut out behind it.

    Middle one - I like the stippling and shading.. though the fish has issues showing volume.

    The bottom one is ok.. not certain what sort of fish has a stringy comb over and a mustache, but well enough. Whoops.. I didn't scroll down far enough and you mentioned that. Neeeeeeever mind.
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    Thank you, interestingly enough, I never noticed that they didn't have gills...what an oversight

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