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    New and looking to improve

    Critique in any way
    Im looking to improve
    Here is a series of characters
    You know what's wrong or could be improved, please share.
    New to coloring.
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    I'm afraid all I can give you at this point is advice to begin studying artistic anatomy. Coloring tips aren't going to help you at the moment. Also, don't be afraid to let the nose cross in front of the eye when you turn the head. Overlapping forms like that helps to keep your drawings from looking as 2d. If you're unfamiliar with perspective, I'd also recommend looking into that as well. That will allow you to plot where such overlaps will occur.

    Here's a hastily scrawled example of what I mean about the noses.
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