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    Looking for critique

    Made it after the Death Stranding E3 trailer.
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    I dig the rocks up front.. a little less the left mjountains that disappear into the sky.


    I haven't seen this trailer so I am not certain what the floating.. people?.. are about.


    The character in the bottom could be a more pronounced.
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    Thank you so much for the comment, about the floating people, the reddit calls them shadow creatures, the community already making theories about the game and some of them are really good.
    Well if you have some time, i definitely recommend to checking out the trailer, i liked it so much.
    So overall the artwork is okay? Or there is any major problem, i am going to the right direction?
    Again thank you for the comment!
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    looks wicked. only thing is there's not anything really gripping my attention.

    it's all one huge image, and no real focal point.

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    Hmm, i agree.
    Maybe this is a general problem with all of my works what i did, i do not feel the depth on my works as well, so i definitely need to work on this, thank you so much!
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