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    The figures in the top boat aren't shrinking in perspective relative to the figures in the bottom boat. Additionally, the viewpoint doesn't make sense. There's also no place for my eyes to rest.
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    I mean, would it be so bad if all anyone remembers about me is that I was a lover of art, of women, and wine? Perhaps I reach too far.


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    its more like symbolism than perspective drawng,,,,,,,,,
    n yhea hes holding,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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    thats becaose the idea expands to a concept thats beyond limits,,,,,,,,,,,

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    Quote Originally Posted by Godel Santos View Post
    thats becaose the idea expands to a concept thats beyond limits,,,,,,,,,,,
    Hahaha! I *LOVE* this line! I'll have to incorporate it in the next few meetings.

    Definitely goes with the Buzz Lightyear meme template.

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    ANGELICAL

    again critics neded,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    Would you please get a picture without the blinds shadow across it?

    Over all - it's just more of the same. Clay looking mush people, a few bit more detailed people, super busy, a flat background like a photo booth, poor posted image quality, and there's that.


    I mean the guy in the bottom right with the four back-boobs was a new addition.


    So consistent sketches... yup.
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    It's very hard to critique your sketches because you take very poor photos of them. Maybe you should just invest in a scanner.

    You do tend to get a good flow of energy in your compositions.

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    mmmmmmmmmmm,,,,, sems you dont undestand,,,,,,,,,Name:  apREY copy.jpg
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    muse emblem,

    muse emblem,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
    how do you FEEL it??
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    spirit of the shore

    tell me what could be better, or if you like n see it ok,,,,,,,,,,,,?
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    Hi! I absolutely love this the contrast between colors is lacking in my opinion, making it difficult where and what kind of light there is(on the tides) , but the palette and the composition are beautiful!

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    America

    is not de final version,,,,,,,,,,,tellme,,,,,do you like the idea and the tchnike?
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    Not really much to critique at this stage so it's going to be difficult to give any kind of assistance. It's a very early, very muddy, work in progress by the looks of things.

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    Beautiful, I like it! This is art

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    I love the style! If you're going for a more expressionist approach, than to my eyes you're nailing it. But as you say its a work in progress - so there must be more to your vision. I say run with it, but know when to stop; I believe that's one of the most important things with expressionism. The mood is what you're trying to preserve / evoke, not the details or realism.
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    Sanctuary

    you have to FEEL plenty of pain in your hiden heart and in the curse of your blood to create redemption,,,,,,,
    belive me,,,
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    original

    original,,
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    look the tchnike was colored pencil sealed whit of wood oil in the stones,,,,,,,,,,,, and oili n the waves
    i tried to make the volume whhit perspectiv insaide,,, and the waves are pure realese,,,,
    im very glad you like ut guys,,,,,,,,,,
    see ,sancuary, in finished art
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    Virgin Orchid

    oh oh oh swet child of mine,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    Is light coming from up (I hope so) as you need to be consist with rules that you set on piece
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3WmrWUEIJo
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dqG...xR6Zn6&index=6

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    the light is just the contrast,,,,,,
    dont try to give my a lesson young one,,,,,,,

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    Where does 'virgin' and 'orchid' come into play on this?

    I don't get what the top banner thing is for or even depicting.

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    sorry for not beeing perfect for you........................

    god deam!! is an exelent drawing whit life and mistery techinke and class...........
    what you want im not seeling myself for an aplause,,,,,,I AM MYSELF...........

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    here is virgin orchid,,,,,,,OH my GOD,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thank you ,,,,thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    *shrug* Cool beans, dude. Obviously I was asking about details on the sketch, and how it all relates to the name, but you opted to come back super salty about it. Hells bells - I won't apologize for your pencil drawing not being clear.
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    CLEAR.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Godel Santos View Post
    CLEAR.
    Mmmm... Just how I like my gravy. Crystal Clear! Hahaha!
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    keep walking man,,,,,,,,,,,,,i just fly,,,,
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    Luciferian, critc needed

    please tell me what you think,,,,,,,,,,ok,,,,?
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    What exactly am I looking at here? I don't intended to be rude or harsh but, I'm having a really hard time making heads or tales of what is happening within this image. I know there are two men(?) fighting but I can't tell why/what they are fighting over or where the fight is taking place. It honestly took me a few goes to even realized the man falling was being stabbed.

    Did you use any references for this image? Did you thumb nail before hand by any chance?

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