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    WIP Illustration - need feedback :)

    Hello guys ! I need some critique on my WIP illustration
    I'm looking for lots of constructive feedback on what to improve before adding any more unnecessary details !

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    Pretty good. Interesting scene. Anatomy looks coherent.

    You seem to have chosen a round lens effect there, which suits the scene but its causing the impression that the building is falling, not following the distortion correctly. Same happens with the ogre/monster on the right side.

    That red stripe and saturated colors on the left building is also dragging my eyes there. Since it appears to be a background feature, I'd desaturate the hell out of the whole structure. Look up for some atmospheric desaturation examples.
    "There're no lines in real life" / Is this a sketchbook? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    Good sense of surprise and menace.

    Perspective is a little messed up, I think. The foreground figure seems almost on the same plane as the building and the green-topped rock. It creates the impression that if they stood up, they'd be taller than the giants.

    The rock is especially annoying me for some reason. Other than merging tonally with the figure's leg and adding to perspective and composition issues, I'm not sure what it's there for. Maybe someone else could school me on it, but I'd be tempted to at least shift it right, merge it with that framing wall/pillar.
    ...which is only my opinion.
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    Thank you so much for your feedback !

    Absolutely amazing and detailed explanation that i was looking for !
    I will try to fix most noticeable issues and fix the artwork !
    Hey ! Visit my sketchbook
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