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    Fox Princess

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    Hey, I'm a beginner artist bascially and I would like to know where I went wrong with this picture. I'm interested in improving in many areas (proportion, perspective, anatomy, construction, texture, etc, etc) so honest critcism on anything will do me good .


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    Are you using any references??? I suggest you to do http://drawabox.com/

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    Not a bad start, but definitely some issues.

    First - I am unclear on the perspective. Where the foxes are relative to the gal.

    Next - definitely anatomy. the head seems awfully large, the eyes not aligned right, and the right hand looks like it was flipped (thumb the wrong way). Also the left (picture left) leg looks way thicker than the right.

    I am certain someone will be along to sprinkle tutorial pointers and what not on where to go, but certainly is a heck of a start, and right now you just need to pick a spot (say head, general body, perspective, etc) and focus on that for the moment.
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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    It's cleaner than some of your other uploads, and shows improvement. But her thumb is on the wrong side of her hand : (

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