Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. #1
    Join Date
    May 2018
    Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts

    Smile First art post - Looking for feedbacks

    Hi everyone! This is my first post here. I'm looking for critique and tips to improve my work and to keep in mind for next artworks. I've already tryed to ask feedbacks on fb groups but I didn't get any one ^^"
    Constructive critics for me are really important to improve and move on so I hope to get some help from you.

    Name:  the meetingLQ.jpg
Views: 1752
Size:  126.2 KB

  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    United States, TX
    Thanked 400 Times in 306 Posts
    This is gorgeous.

    Currently it seems like she's a mermaid in a dirty pond. Which is in-itself an intriguing concept, but doesn't seem to fit the overall vibe or reality depicted in the piece.

    You seem to be in need of more cheerful colors and brighter light. Here's a bit of an exaggerated example of what I feel might make it sing. Granted this is all just my opinion.
    Name:  Telepathy.jpg
Views: 985
Size:  168.6 KB
    Feel free to add saturation and value contrast points throughout the image. The eye travels by jumping. So why would you cater to something less than chaotic? Just make sure they are all subordinate to the main focal point which will be the strongest of these.

    Also, I basically follow one rule: if a color is only one color, you've got a problem. It needs to be at least two or three. Meaning if you've got some blue, add some green or purple then throw some yellow to that green or some red to that purple. It's about building intensity or temperature.
    Last edited by David_a_ray; May 24th, 2018 at 11:59 PM.

    We could be struck by lightning at any moment. What kind of universe is that?

  4. #3
    Join Date
    May 2018
    Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts
    thank you! really good feedback. I will try to add saturation and to play a bit with colours on this piece as soon as I can, the sample is exaggerated but gives the idea.
    Thank you, I see it differently now!

Similar Threads

  1. begginner need some feedbacks
    By Nuohno in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: March 17th, 2018, 12:02 PM
  2. CCM261 Critiques and Feedbacks
    By rikimaru915 in forum Art Critique Center
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: July 28th, 2009, 04:01 PM
  3. Art: My first work in openCanvas, feedbacks please! :)
    By mast990 in forum Fine Art
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: May 20th, 2005, 02:32 PM

Members who have read this thread: 1


Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
Designed by The Coldest Water, we build the coldest best water bottles, ice packs and best pillows.