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    Technically speaking

    How could I have made this painting better
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    The perspective of the boombox is wonky and could have used some better handling.


    The neck seems super weird.. overly long and thick? Perhaps a shoulder would have helped with it.


    The fingers get a little weird, perspectively, but sort of goes with the vibe.


    Kudos on using more than dragging a single fat, flat, brush everywhere.
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    I pretty well agree except I like the hand. I think the shoulders aren't wide enough as he's straight on. You could make them appear wider by expanding his top. BTW, how big are these?

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    I am incorporating hands in wierd positions in my art. It’s more challenging. Most of my art is 18x 24. I want to start having really good draftsmanship and push myself.

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    The smokey eyes and eyelashes are well done too.
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