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    I'd say increase the contrast to make it a little easier to see, and work on emphasizing the folds and motion of the cloth/drapery in the first one to help convey the motion of the character bc how smooth they look (especially the right arm cloth thing) make it seem static. The anatomy could use a little work (the legs seem a little thin on both of them and the shins are too long on the bottom drawing) and the pose for the bottom one looks stiff for a movement that should be more dynamic. Besides that, I think they're good drawings for pencil sketches, but to take it to the next level you might consider starting to work in color too. Keep it up!

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