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    childhood heart

    tell my what you think,,,,,,,,,
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    I like it but the way it is cropped makes it feel like there's more to the image that I'm not able to see (such as the cutting out of the lower figures legs and the top of the arch). Other than that the anatomy could use a little work, it seems like you struggle a little with forearms and hands. Also maybe taking a clearer picture would help with the clarity of the image as it feels a little blurry/shaky.

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    I agree with Leycrows, the image is not clear enough. I can tell you've focused on perspective but because of the angle of the photo everything looks wonky. The anatomy seems out of proportion, the elbows have too much of a straight angle and the shoulders are stiff. Maybe try and make some reference photo's and compare them to the poses you've drawn. I do like how you've established a sense of enviroment, and how it looks like we're peeking into a dramatic scene.

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    im goint to print it grayscale, whit a filter that balanced the blurry sence, A2 and then paint it maybe you guys can help whit that, in how to manage the color,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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