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    It's hard to say without a better focused, better lit photo. It looks as though there is sunlight coming in through a window and is making bright spots on the piece where none seem to exist.


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    yeha thats sad,,,,,,,,,,,,brigyh, sad and unike,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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    guys ,,,,,kmon,,could you stop being sarcastic??
    im starting to dislike concept art.org,,,,,
    i took at leas 35 or 40 pictures of this just cant get better one,,,,,

    maybe if i paint digitaly the non focused parts?????????

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    Well to be honest you might want to learn everything from scratch. This shows very little knowledge of drawing, composition and color
    People keep telling me : " Why do you keep suggesting courses and books instead of just giving me the solution directly ? "

    Well if i could condense all the necessary informations that take hours of explanation and demonstration into a single post, i would gladly do it

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    you cant judge my years of study from one ilustration !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    It looks as if it might be interesting, but the photo is letting it down. Tape it flat to a board, find somewhere with good natural light (not direct), almost stand over it to take your shot making sure that you don't leave a shadow over it. Crop and/or straighten it out digitally. Also correct levels if required.

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    no,,,,,,,,,,

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    Obviously you can take a picture so take two whole minutes and get a good one.

    guys ,,,,,kmon,,could you stop being sarcastic??
    Zero sarcasm on my end, but a statement.

    Though now, it's more of an eye roll after seeing your indignant responses to folks asking for you to clear up the image.
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    i cant,,,understand i already told you that this is the better one, i took several, its my camara i tryd all the methods, and this is how the color semms more alive, why it has to be THAT realistic,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,?
    i tell you guys i never had a tesult like this ,,,,,,,,,,thats why im sharing it whit you,,,,dont you see anithing positive?

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    look this is a good picture of another drawing,,,,it looks fine becose the perspective isnt that complicated and is the original is grayscale,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    procesion of Virtue ,,,,,,finished

    hope you like it,,,,,,,,
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    I don't give a flying fruit basket about the color right now. I just need the damned thing to be not blurry and an attempt at being more straight on facing.

    I'll tell you what.. am I being punked? Is that what this is?! Over all - your responsive have given me a sensible chuckle in the last few mornings.

    Side note - how do you like my drawing of a dog, standing perfectly still, pre-sneeze, in the pale moon light?

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    Hurrah for Conan!
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    You need to get proportions down before starting adding tones to drawing for example arms are too long, pick up anatomy book like Loomis Figure drawing all it worth and study it

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    in the simbolism, in the message,who is the only ony one who sees or feels the hand is therae?

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    I was certain it was a Wallmaster from Zelda. Shucks.
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    you knoe how many times i tried to use the guntlet to torow and control hughe rocks?

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    I see some pretty interesting stuff going on here, the dynamics on the characters are pretty good and I like how every single one of them has an original attitude. And I like what you've done with the golden ration. I will not pretend that I am able to read the story so I will not go into that, but if you could share some info about what is the background of the image that will be very nice! Keep it up!

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    epic duel. original

    nedds nore line work on thy serpent?
    tell me what you think about the colored..............................
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    great drawing

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    nice

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    childhood heart

    tell my what you think,,,,,,,,,
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    I like it but the way it is cropped makes it feel like there's more to the image that I'm not able to see (such as the cutting out of the lower figures legs and the top of the arch). Other than that the anatomy could use a little work, it seems like you struggle a little with forearms and hands. Also maybe taking a clearer picture would help with the clarity of the image as it feels a little blurry/shaky.

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    I agree with Leycrows, the image is not clear enough. I can tell you've focused on perspective but because of the angle of the photo everything looks wonky. The anatomy seems out of proportion, the elbows have too much of a straight angle and the shoulders are stiff. Maybe try and make some reference photo's and compare them to the poses you've drawn. I do like how you've established a sense of enviroment, and how it looks like we're peeking into a dramatic scene.

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    im goint to print it grayscale, whit a filter that balanced the blurry sence, A2 and then paint it maybe you guys can help whit that, in how to manage the color,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    The coloring seems.. ok. Unclear the red/orange stripe across the middle... and a lack of coherent lighting throws off the gold highlights.


    The arm and sword get lost and muddy.


    The bottom of the drawn is losing cohesion.. from coherent coloring and repeated overlays.


    The background is pretty flat and boring, but I assume you'll do something more with that later?
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    remastered

    there,,,,,,,,ok??
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    SEA WILL

    critic nedeed,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    Busy.. but I dig the sort of cross hatched lines pulled to the bottom left.


    The people are little more than maniquians, but that seems to be your thing.


    Sizing and perspective for the boat seem off.


    Unclear if that's an actual person holding to a.. mast? .. or what's going on there.
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