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    This is one of the pieces I made for my senior thesis. we already had the presentations but I still want some critiques, thanks!Name:  entrancio shitty.jpg
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    It looks nice..


    There are a few visual issues I have.. say the sky near the top.. is that visual representation of a clear evening sky, or is that clouds rolling around. I ask because then I see more coherent clouds in the middle sort of covering the sun, and it seems like a style mish-mash.


    I am not fully understanding the building grouping to the right as opposed to the tent to the left, but meh.. probably part of your presentation.

    For a street that dirty, and with chunks of rock on it, I would think that center white painted line would be work, faded, and chipped.
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