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    The Nature of an Eye

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    I guess improving the overall design, if i should have made the composition a bit different.

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    where is the light source? everything seems to bright and the anatomy of the eyeball is off, the pupil is too big, you put the iris on top of the eyeball but the iris is inside the cornea and from the side view looks like an oval.


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    The design is okay, but the ellipses of the iris and pupil aren't. Also either do the whole picture flat, or work out your form with light.

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