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    Flaming Gloria :)

    Cant wait for the feedback guys!

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    That is a super awkward pose. Try holding that for more than a few seconds. It looks like she has to poop
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    Agreed.. from the feet/knees to the weird over balance chest to rump.. it's all jacked up.


    Also - with everything, mostly, being a side view I am not certain the viewer would be able to see into the barrel hole of the gun.
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    Something about line weight, making the lines facing the light thinner might have an interesting look. When you make the line art with thick lines all over the place you lose the three dimensional feel. You could have used the leggings with netting to give the legs dimension and perspective by wrapping the netting better abound the leg.
    Put some thought into the pose next time.

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    Pose should tell about attitude of person or who is. About line weight:

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    The line weight is really important,

    guys i am redoing the whole image,

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    *sigh* why is she in a thong? It frankly looks ridiculous. Is that a joint in her mouth or some hand rolled cigarette? Find a reference for her hands.
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