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    LOL: Jinx fanart

    Does anything look odd in my drawing?
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    Finished version of my fanart.

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    You can see the tops of her feet even though she's facing us straight on

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    I don't understand the right arm and how/where it goes.


    The mouth/nose seems weird.


    Why is trhere random blue coloring? Right cheeck, left shoulder, belly, etc.


    Something seems wonky with the left left going right into the abdomen and no hitting a pelvis bone.


    Everything could use some shadows in a consistent manner.


    The bra seems not to take into account the boobs underneath.
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    Is she in air as her feet seems to suggest it

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    I feel like you are intentionally hiding her hands because maybe they are hard to draw?

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