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    hello so I tried my best to make this more dynamic and I would appreciate any feedback!


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    It is very muddy.. I am not certain what the 'boss' is, or even where abouts this is taking place. I would thing focusing on more definable characteristics of the interesting character (the boss) would be important.

    Also - I am not understanding where the sword guy is leaping from, or how that is relative to the boss creature's size.
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