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    Help with Anatomy

    Hey, I need some feedback on the anatomy on this piece, any help is appreciated ! Thanks guys !

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    The shoulders need work, add collar bones and show how the breast muscle flows into the arm. I suggest you make the bottom part more readable by changing the pose to get a better silhouette.
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    Adding what eezacque said look also how Deltoid attach to collar bone in front and scapula at back, also study how trapezius fits and how those bones fits together.
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    Thanks for your replies guys ! I made some changes , I will study collar bone area more couse I am still not sure if it looks properly.
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    I think it looks okay. Not sure what is happening on the lower half, but I think pushing it more will help. Never be scared to ruin a piece to learn.

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    I think the expression on her face is great. That said, I think you need to push the pose more. Make it more intense of a pose. Like right now, her expression is intense but she is just sort of passively holding two gigantic hammers. I feel like if she is strong enough to do battle with those things then she would be strong enough to hold them in a more dynamic pose.

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    Hey guys, I really appreciate your help! I completely forgot to update on the final version but here I am
    @Black Spot I took the risk and pushed it as it is, I was trying to move the hammers but eventually I liked the pose as it is. I agree tho, Good lesson is worth ruining a piece !
    @Chris Fraser, thanks! I read your post a bit too late, but I hope after finishing it, the expression is still good. You may be right here, I wanted those hammers to feel heavy and to make her feel that weight during the fight, I should explore the pose a bit more tho. I will keep that in mind for another piece and thanks for your support!
    There is the final version:

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