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    Post Boss fight scene, how to improve the staging and focus

    Hello everyone

    so I'm working on this boss fight piece and this is what I have so far


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    this is a more developed sketch from my thumbnail
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    and not a finished thing but I wanna know what I can improve
    what I'm struggling with is, I feel like its hard to distinguish that this is on top of a cliff
    I also think it looks lacking in terms of focus? I'm not sure how to describe it otherwise
    but I dont know if adding a stream of light on some area would work, since its a foggy/toxic environment?

    but any critique on what I mentioned or anything else is needed and appreciated.
    thank you


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    The very bottom one is vastly superior to all others in my opinion. In addition, the last one has far better story and mood to it. It's also a much better composition in general. I want to take you by the shoulders in the most friendly way possible and shake you for not picking that one.
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    aahh, you should more than shake me by the shoulders
    It actually was my choice but then I felt like since its a boss fight it would fit the brief I have more to actually have them facing each other,,, now I'm wondering if I should make sketch of that one and see how it turns haha.. *vibrates*

    thank you for your feedback

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    My vote is on the very bottom one or the top right hand corner one. Much nicer comps.

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