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    Beginner looking for critique

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    Hey, this is meant to be a drawing of Hunter the cheetah from Spyro. The anatomy looks off and probably other a few things as well, so any criticism would be very helpful and is very welcome .


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    I think the problem is it looks less like a Spyro character and more like a generic anthro furry thing. If you want it to look like something out of spyro, make it look cartoony. Play with proportion and gesture, expression and stuff. Basically, draw more than one, draw a bunch. But push different aspects each time. Make it look less fursona.

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