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    Fantasy game cover art

    Hello, I'm Alex, working on a cover for a fantasy game, and really looking for something that I can improve, or some mistakes I do not see, will really appreciate anything that would help me improve.

    Thank you.

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    Hi Alex, you have a nice dynamic composition going on, and I really like the colors! A couple of things that seem funky to me are:
    -The purple demon guy in the corner. I think there's a strange tangent happening with the tongue thing that confuses my eye. I can't tell if it's a giant gaping hole for a head or something else. Also, while the rendering is nice on the hand near the sword, I think you lost the local color too much. It seems separate from the rest of the demon because it doesn't contain that purple
    -Scary orc(?) guy fighting the dwarf. Not sure if it's intentional, but the armored shoulder looks like a stump arm.

    I think the lava cracks are too bright. While a pleasing color, I'm not sure what the main focal point of the piece is because it's such a dominant tone.

    Nice work! Good luck
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