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    Getting Weird In Space

    Hey there

    I recently read one of Isaac Asimov's short stories "The Last Question" (Really recommend by the way. The dude had such a innovative mind). He mentions an object called a PlanetaryVAC, which is essentially a computer the size of a planet. I've designed my own interpretation of it.

    I would love some critique on this piece. Any thoughts and opinions. One bit of critique I'm looking for is any thoughts on how to push the sci-fi aesthetic. (Literally writing this I had an idea from someone to show some way of doing data dumps)



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    You want to make it more Sci-fi? A cube in space with lasers shooting through it isn't sci-fi enough? I suppose you could push the colors some more. The whole black and white thing is great for realistic feeling stuff, but we know from Star Trek and the Matrix that giant space cube computers should probably have a green glow to them. That'd push the sci-fi feeling a bit more I think.

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    Thanks for the reply! I definitely agree. Some more colour would make this pop
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