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    Evening Desire

    An idea I have had in my head for years, finally painted it.
    Acrylics on 16x20 canvas
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    Disjoint jointed perspective, and a little plain for my taste, but so it goes.

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    What do you mean by "Disjoint jointed perspective"?
    Quote Originally Posted by modi123 View Post
    Disjoint jointed perspective, and a little plain for my taste, but so it goes.

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    Just the perspective seems odd in terms of where the rectangle things are pointing for a focal point to where the left wall seems to be at the shoulders/butt and then where it is near the feet.. and any focal point lines drawn from the body highlights don't match. up.
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    The perspective of the interior doesn't quite match the perspective of those exterior pillars.

    I thought that maybe the interior room would be tilting up, but then that water you have on the ground would make no sense.

    Seems like you went with different perspectives for each part of the pic.
    Is this a sketchbook? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    The idea that I was going for was for her to be in a room in a hi-rise apartment, with the viewer looking past her out a large picture window at skyscrapers in the background.

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