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    Critiques?

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    All feedback welcome. Concept/intentions: image inspired by a feeling, a "flowing of emotions, information, etc" from the heart between the self and Universe. As a broke college student who would like to make some extra cash doing art that feels good to create, input on piece's potential in general as well is much appreciated.
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    The anatomy is lacking or misunderstood in these and so is the volume of the figure. Try putting your body and arms in those positions paying attention to what your shoulder muscles do and which muscles flex or are supine, how they rotate and what the underlying bone structures are doing. Same goes for the rest of the body and the neck and head. A body isn't that flat, everything interlocks and inserts. Pose a model and really look at the light and shadow across all the forms.

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    Thanks, yeah it was supposed to sort of melt into abstraction towards the head so I don't want it too realistic there, but yeah the body anatomy definitely seemed off

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    Check out Andrew Loomis Figure drawing all its worth and Proko for anatomy also get in life drawing classes if you have chance

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