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    Good bad and ugly?

    Hey guys looking for any and all feedback! Self taught so any advice/comments/paintovers/etc are highly valued. Thanks in advance!

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    Something seems off about the next area. Like it's abnormally small, he has a really large trapezius and small chin depth where the rest of the guy's fingers are. I would focus more that area on the reference. I would suggest doing some studies focusing on the jaw/chin and shoulder area.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dominicque1 View Post
    Something seems off about the next area. Like it's abnormally small, he has a really large trapezius and small chin depth where the rest of the guy's fingers are. I would focus more that area on the reference. I would suggest doing some studies focusing on the jaw/chin and shoulder area.
    thanks first off for the feedback! I agree with you about the chin I definitely missed that. The shoulder area was more an afterthought I'll need to go back and check that out. Thanks again!

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    No problem! I just realized I wrote next, instead of Neck. Glad you could still understand, and you're welcome. It can be hard to spot things when you're working on top of them.

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    The teeth is really bugging me. You missed the perspective and bone structure by a couple of miles there.

    Also the right side of his face (left of the pic) seems to have melted down. Kinda looks like Sloth, from Goonies.

    Hey you guys!

    p.s.: I just noticed that thumb metacarpo is really long. Looks a bit like a monkey hand.
    "There're no lines in real life" / Is this a sketchbook? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    Thanks everyone for their feedback it mean a lot! i have taken into consideration each comment.

    Here is an updated version:
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    Here's where I ended up. I feel that I addressed issues with the neck, chest and jaw line as well as the placement of the hand, ear and hair line. I'm interested to hear thoughts. Thanks!
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    Just wanted to post an update to this one I was wondering what feedback could be given for future paintings, here’s where I ended up:
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