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    Feedback for a fish?

    Hey everybody! I'm trying to combine inks and digital colours, but I'm not really sure how to take my work to the next level. Is there anything I can do to add depth, or improve it in any other way? Any advice would be much appreciated.
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    I would possibly bring the bottom lip further out the water or at least expose it more. It will help establish the structure of the mouth much easier.

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    The volume and line weight of the scales, specially around the edges, are making a bit difficult to read the whole form of the fish. I'd tune that down quite a bit.
    "There're no lines in real life" / Is this a sketchbook? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    Here is video for how think about line weight

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    Love your ink work. Feel the fish body could benefit from a few highlights on parts facing the light source.

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