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    I'd love a critique

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    I'm having trouble getting colors that are close to each other while being distinct.


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    My biggest problem right now is what is that thing in front of the character on the rights face?
    Last edited by Mike Tenebrae; March 15th, 2018 at 10:28 AM.

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    I like the colours, I like the characters, I like the style. It's all very nice. But I have to agree that the guy on the right does look a bit like he has a chunk of cheese floating in front of him. Also his arm closest to us looks a bit weird.
    Last edited by AJams; March 15th, 2018 at 05:06 PM.

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    where are their cast shadows?

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