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    Just looking to get some feedback

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    The sighted issue is a transition from from to back view of the mech's right foot. Nice sticker or stamp.

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    I am confused on the form and volume. You ahve shading in some places, but lack it elsewhere.


    Also the knee cap of the right turned foot (our right) would change with the angle of the foot.

    Solid coloring job!
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    I don't want to be one of those people who just nitpicks, but why do the triangle and... oh what the hell are those things called... uh... not a square, but RECTANGLE! That's it!

    Why do the triangle and rectangle gems have highlights befitting spheres? That's a rhetorical question. You don't have to answer. Just, you know... fix it.

    Or don't. I'm not terribly invested in this after all. It's just one of those things that would be obvious only *after* you spent all your money on printing the stickers.

    Oh, the eyes also indicate two more light sources than the other miscellaneous reflective surfaces do.
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