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    So recently, I've been really trying to focus on my concept art skills, I'm still trying to pinpoint an exact style but I think I'm starting to figure some things out

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    and here's a WIP (i still need to fix the legs on the dragons and add more detail to objects in the foreground. Most of my colors are finalized, though)
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    Thanks guys!


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    First picture: You need to put in atmospheric perspective and blur some areas. Everything looks like it's in focus which makes the image look flat.

    Second picture: Work on her left hand (the one on the ground). Tilt it to the left of the picture (Left from the viewer's point of view) more because it looks like she has a broken wrist. Her right foot needs to tilt to the left as well.

    Third picture: Work on the values. The value of the sky and foreground must be different because they exist at different distances. The image looks too saturated as well, desaturate it a little bit.
    Last edited by Artide; February 28th, 2018 at 10:23 AM.

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