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    some works, hope you tell me some advice,,,,,

    some works, hope you tell me some advice,,,,,
    what do you think of this style?
    should i keep doing this line or work in other conceptual board??
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    guys come on ist worthy,,tell me what you think,,,,,,,,,,,,


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    The figures are really out of wack. I think you should work on your figure drawing. New Master Academy is really of high quality from my experience

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    out of wack...............................what does it mean,,,,,forgod sake i dont pretend to be the best,,,,,,,,,,just want your sincere advaice,,guys,,

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    Quote Originally Posted by Godel Santos View Post
    out of wack...............................what does it mean,,,,,forgod sake i dont pretend to be the best,,,,,,,,,,just want your sincere advaice,,guys,,
    Your figures look like they were hit by a truck. If you intend to do representational art, you need to seriously study human proportion and construction. On the bright side, I do like the quality of your lines.
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    what can you tell me about this,,,,,i did in art academy,,,,
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    Your first drawing is good from the flow/gesture standpoint, but it lacks anatomical structure and perspective. I recommend to study perspective and anatomy. Check out Proko's site and youtube channel, and study one body part at a time.
    His approach to anatomy works really well once you have a good grasp of perspective.

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    Hey, Godel. Sorry about some the snipey comments you've received so far, I personally don't find them constructive. I have to say you have a great sense of shape in your drawings, some of them have excellent volume, and others show well thought out foreshortening. Yes, if you wanted you people or characters to seem more realistic then studying anatomy of humans and animals is a great idea, and there are many choices for that. You do have a style that I would be wise to keep (and refine) because it's what makes your art unique. As far as advice for your drawing technique, my first comment would be keep a sharper tip on your pencil for the initial sketch (as in your standing female figure drawing) and be delicate in your lines, as that will allow you to gently and cleanly develop your characters. Secondly, don't "force" the darker lines that follow the initial sketch, let them come to be by emphasizing the light sketch lines. Talk to yourself as you sketch, correcting and praising lines as you go, carving out your image slowly. Looking fwd to future images.

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